I was already a bit dejected. I’d put my heart into this story. Toughen up, old man.“Okay. Let’s start with the story arc. I think you could begin with something more dramatic that draws the reader into the story more rapidly. It’s the third page before we have a clue that they are boarding a spaceship. Lead with it. Even a simple a sentence of thought from the main character that said, ‘I took one last look at the earth before I boarded for my journey to the stars.’ Something that immediately sets the scene. Then you can deal with the weight of his baggage, the nods to people he knew and worked with, and the scurry of preparing his room and meeting his neighbors. The way it reads at the moment, he might be arriving on campus for his second year of college. Once you got past the slightly awkward opening, though, the story arc took shape in a well-defined progression of events that made life on the spaceship reasonable and believable if the reader is capable of believing science. Not a word?Daniel. Right, not a word.Me. When we get turned on we get wet “down there”, our nipples get hard and stick out.Daniel. We? Or you?Me. Ok me, when I get turned on that happens to me.Daniel. TFA.How can I be reacting this way? My son just got me to admit that I can get wet and my nipples will stick out, and that is exactly what is happening to me by talking about this with him.Me. What does it take to get a boy like you turned on?Daniel. This is doing it, totally.Me. OMG I’m sorry, not trying to do that.Daniel. Ok, totally ok. You are doing great by the way, did your ther****t ever get you this far?Me. NeverDaniel. Then I’m not letting up, besides this is way way better than dirty diapers.Me. Yea I guess so.That was the end of my first day of sexting with my son. What he pointed out there really floored me. 12 years of therapy was trounced with one afternoon of sexting with my son. He promised to never talk about it in person, I was starting to realize that this was.
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